Lou Reed’s banana
splattered in black tar heroin,
but they still want
to feel his rot from the inside.
Unhappy until
the smell is acrid
and salivating,
singed flesh,
and burning hair.
They don’t want to watch
the violent jerking,
hauling’ re-hauling.
They just want the tremors of before
and the smell of burnt toast.
Wow…what a gut-punch of visceral imagery! Well done!
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Thank you so much! And thank you for the encouragement, I worry I can get a little out of hand with these things.
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I’m in awe at all the different ways we see/interpret/feel how the physical world acts on the human condition and in how many ways we can communicate this. Keep being you 🙂
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keep em comming
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Thanks Dad!
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